Very pretty, but...
The drawing is really beautiful, and the mood it creates is definitely in line with where the story seems to be going, but the lack of well-structured language kind of ruined it for me. Exquisite art demands an expansive vocabulary to accompany it.
Pretty darn awesome.
I would have had the elevator headed to the 13th floor though.
or maybe to... the twilight zone.
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